Neliana
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Just the girl-next-door
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Post by Neliana on May 10, 2005 15:25:26 GMT -1
Wow... Luciano sounds too good to be true. Where can I find guys like him? Lovely piece of work, Duchessa!
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Post by Duchessa on May 10, 2005 16:28:14 GMT -1
heehee, u r all so nice! Will do the next part soonest...will probs be the first part of the actual wedding... xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
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Post by Alex on May 10, 2005 20:10:33 GMT -1
yay wedding! it would be soo funny to have Giuditta start crying first...and Silvia..together..lol ;D
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Merla
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^^My Little Merla!^^
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Post by Merla on May 15, 2005 16:27:18 GMT -1
Ok, since I was not allowed (till recently) onto this board (stupid American release dates...) I just finsihed reading this. OMG! Luciano is sooooo sweet! I want a guy like him!! Really badly too... lol. Keep writing!!! (BTW, I want that dress!)
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 15, 2005 18:57:11 GMT -1
it's highly unlikely that sylvia will start crying, i just can't imagine it.... she's such an uncrying kind of person! Maybe a dab at the eyes with a hankerchief for show but, otherwise.....
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Post by Alex on May 15, 2005 23:49:29 GMT -1
but didn't she just kinda cry in Duchess'a fic? when she saw Arianna in the dress?? ...and what is you said is exactly y it would be so funny..it's so out of usual character..but u never kno..it might happen and be hilarious ;D
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 16, 2005 5:39:51 GMT -1
oh yeah, i suppose.... anyway, Duchessa, write some more! what's the Bellezzan weddng ceremony? is it different? i suppose you could just check in the back of COF for ideas
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Post by Iadoremaggie on May 16, 2005 6:37:21 GMT -1
anyway.....
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 16, 2005 17:24:25 GMT -1
anyway, what? this thread's for discussing Duchessa's fanfic which is what we're doing!
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Post by Alex on May 16, 2005 21:46:40 GMT -1
hey yea..Bellezzan wedding!!!!!!!!!!! All i know is that there will definitely be a demasking..woohoo! and official one...that one at the end of COF doesnt count..hee hee
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 17, 2005 16:34:08 GMT -1
yeah, she would have had to have picked it up after a while!
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Post by Alex on May 17, 2005 22:50:12 GMT -1
lol true...if she left it there the guard would've definitely ran Luciano through and what kind of happy ending would that be ;D?
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 18, 2005 7:57:15 GMT -1
not a very nice one, i don't think but still, as we don't have to see that bit, we don't need to think ahead so we can just think of up to the bit where she throws it away, not where she picks it up ;D
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Post by Alex on May 18, 2005 20:18:21 GMT -1
oh yea..i suppose....hey so...are you gonna post any more soon Duchessa ?
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Post by Duchessa on May 20, 2005 19:08:22 GMT -1
I most certainly am…..Eek! The time has come at last!!
Finally, after a torturously long morning, the hour had arrived. The Cathedral was packed full of the hoards of important guests, yet outside the cathedral was a vast mass of ordinary Bellezzans, all dressed in their best, crowding as tightly as they could towards the doors of the Cathedral, despite the fact that the crowd was so vast many of them were spilling out onto bridges to prevent falling into the canal! The air was charged, almost buzzing with anticipation…all they needed was the Duchessa. Inside the Cathedral, Luciano stood with Gaetano, talking little, feeling the whole time as if he wanted to dash from the building, yet never managing to gain control of his feet. He was ignoring the hundreds of Talian nobles around him, festoons of velvet, lace, taffeta and every jewel known to man crammed into the many pews of the Cathedral. However, he had managed to pick out two figures in black and white robes from the congregation, Sulien and Sandro, of course. Then there was Tommaso and Angelo, Gianfranco and Valeria (who had returned to join her husband after attending to her daughter), Aurelio and Rafaella, Dethridge and Leonora, even Paulo and Cesare (Theresa having regretfully declined the invitation on the strength that she couldn’t very well haul all the babies up to Bellezza for a glamorous wedding!). Then, of course, there was Gaetano and, perhaps most importantly, Rodolfo. It seemed, just as before his duel with Duke Niccolo, that everyone he knew and loved in Talia was there to support him. It made him feel as little braver. The next second, however, he almost laughed. How on earth could he compare the duel with Duke Niccolo to his wedding? Then his thoughts suddenly veered off out of Talia, he would have loved for Georgia, Sky and Nick to have been there…however, he knew that was quite impossible. No.” Rodolfo had said when Luciano had suggested it, “I found out a little of what happened after the incident in Giglia, they have destroyed their talismans.”<br> “What? How could they do that??”<br> “Luciano, you have to understand how it was for them, it was like that for you! They can’t keep on living two lives…hasn’t your past experience told you that?”<br>Luciano was silent, even now he wasn’t keen to discuss this. “Perhaps it is simply chance or maybe it is design but one way or another, people are only designated one life. That is the life they must live. Bringing Georgia and the others back here would only make it that much harder for them” Luciano sighed to himself but pushed the thought out of his mind, he was not going to think about anything to do with how he had died on his wedding day…<br> “Alright?” Rodolfo had suddenly appeared at his side, just as Gaetano had turned away to ask something of one of the officials in a nearby pew. “I think so.” he replied, only a little shakily. “Excellent.” Rodolfo was smiling at his in the knowing way that only he could. “You know, Luciano, marrying my daughter is going to make a lot of things of you.”<br> “How do you mean?”<br> “Well, primarily of course it will make you a Duke! But then that will mean something else, you will be the most important Stravagante in Talia, as far as social standing is concerned.”<br>Luciano looked at him, a new kind of panic dawning in his eyes. “Thanks for that…always a good statement to help a guy with nerves…” Rodolfo laughed, “My boy, I have no doubt that you will fulfil both of the task admirably! However, there is one more thing this is going to make of you…after today you will be my son-in-law.”<br>Luciano looked at him “And that is something for which I will forever be grateful.”<br>There was a moment when the older man smiled at the younger and the terror in the younger man’s face was seen to lessen considerably, to be replaced with a sort of quiet satisfaction, before there was a collective sigh of rapture and Luciano spun around to see the shimmering figure in the doorway.
Heehee, Rodolfo and Luciano father/son stuff, sorry about that….next stop MARRIAGE!!!! (Arianna and Luciano….not Rodolfo and Luciano….ew….) xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
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Post by Athena on May 20, 2005 22:22:08 GMT -1
Oh, geez.....I was all hyped up for the wedding, and then a CUTOFF!! In any case, this is a beautiful story and I cannot wait to hear more!
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 25, 2005 14:28:35 GMT -1
this is lovely! *sniffs into handkerchief, overcome with emotion* go luciano and arianna! and yeah, preferably the wedding would be between them not Rodolfo and Luciano....
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Post by Alex on May 26, 2005 20:46:45 GMT -1
yea..so...joyous! happy happy joy joy! ..as the pirates would say wedding ho!! huzzah! *waits impatiently for the ceremony to start* *fidget* *jump up and down* *glance around* *hangs head* more Duchessa ;D!
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Merla
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^^My Little Merla!^^
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Post by Merla on Jun 5, 2005 19:56:03 GMT -1
Woo! I luff it, Duchessa! I agree with Athena, though... hyping... hyping more... CUTOFF! Lol... v. good, keep writing, Duchessa!
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Post by Rachel on Jun 19, 2005 11:15:34 GMT -1
its sssooo cool!!!! ;D but u havent done any for ages now duchessa!
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