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Post by on Jul 31, 2004 14:49:48 GMT -1
Nice, quiet, happyish sort of poem I wrote one night...
Its got a strange rhuthm, but I dont care.
One night I watched the silver clear
reflections, of the moon and stars
mirrored in the midnight ocean
yet high above the heavans
And it seemed then, that the horizon was just a ring of earth
Jutting out into the endless blackness of space
And I could jump and fall for infinity
And lie among the stars
So I waded out, the dark cool waters swirling round
And I found the edge, with oceans rushing over
And I looked don at infinity, And watched the dancing stars
And jumped
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Post by on Jul 31, 2004 14:55:36 GMT -1
Slightly more seriouse poem I wrote back when I was stressed and depressed and stuck in a lousy school and was lonley and all that..
A cage of glass surrounding me
Trapped in by walls that are not there
I touch the bars I cannot see
The loneliness each day I wear
Emotions muffle, voices hush
The world distorted through my eyes
The weight around me tries to crush
And no-one listens to my cries
For no-one listens to my cries
The weight around me tries to crush
The world distorted to my eyes
Emotions muffled, voices hushed
The loneliness each day I wear
Touching bars I cannot see
Trapped in by walls that are not there
A cage of glass surrounding me
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Post by LadyJasmine on Aug 4, 2004 16:36:37 GMT -1
Wow, thoughs poems are excellent Kris. The second one made me want to cry! You obviouslt have a lot of talent. You should definately post more. ;D
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Post by Lavita on Sept 12, 2004 8:12:31 GMT -1
definitly post more kris! I liked the second..more solitary one...more moving  |
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Post by Duchessa on Sept 12, 2004 11:25:58 GMT -1
ooh yeah, i couldn't decide, i love them both. Write more!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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Post by on Sept 12, 2004 15:59:08 GMT -1
meh! i have replies! giddy aunt! meh! you critics!! ;D  |
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Post by Lavita on Sept 12, 2004 16:07:31 GMT -1
less of the caffiene Kris ;D ..u sound hyper |
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Post by on Sept 12, 2004 16:10:21 GMT -1
ahem. *quickly hides coffee cups and empty sugar packets.* me? hyper? no...
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Post by Lavita on Sept 12, 2004 16:12:20 GMT -1
<nods professionaly>
In denial..yes..common reaction
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Post by on Sept 12, 2004 16:17:09 GMT -1
no... NO!!! *backs away and gets stuck into striaght jacket and carted away by big strong men* noooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!
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Post by Lavita on Sept 12, 2004 16:20:09 GMT -1
and a dramatic its just you and a white padded cell now |
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Post by Duchessa on Oct 17, 2004 14:50:53 GMT -1
*wanders in looking dazed and confused*
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
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