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Post by LadyJasmine on Jul 22, 2004 8:52:00 GMT -1
Hi everyone. I hope you like the 2 poems im submiting, there not brilliant or anything, and they have absolutely nothing to do with the books, it didnt say they had to be, so im sorry if im breaking any rules. But I hope you enjoy them! ;D
Snowy Night
Brilliant is the snow tonight,
Surrounding me,
My eyes alight.
It falls so gently,
A blanket of white.
Dark skys seem now to be so bright.
It truly is,
The perfect night.
©Veronica C. Hume 2004
Time
We lose track of hours when locked in our towers,
of mental and subtle regret.
We lose our minds in the sands of time,
And never know they've gone.
We lose our lovers,
And our brothers.
Because of grudges long since lost.
As we decay among the frey.
In this hell called........Time
©Veronica C.Hume2004
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bambidevaco
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Post by bambidevaco on Jul 22, 2004 19:31:17 GMT -1
wow, they are realy realy good. you should be very proud. have you got any more?
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Post by Enrico Poggi on Jul 22, 2004 21:09:31 GMT -1
Im more a lymerics person so my opinion doesnt count for much but when I have look at it anilitically i cna see why it would be good (that's probably the highest praise anyone will ever get from me)
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Post by Duchessa on Jul 23, 2004 10:39:09 GMT -1
I thought they were really good. Wish I could write poetry like that.
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo ;D
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Post by 0georgie0 on Jul 24, 2004 3:03:07 GMT -1
im not exactly a poetic person but i think there great
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Post by LadyJasmine on Jul 24, 2004 23:28:42 GMT -1
Thanks everyone! im glad you liked! I have some more that ill post later.
And its good to see you perking up James! ;D Thanks for the compliment, see you online
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Post by 0georgie0 on Jul 26, 2004 5:18:07 GMT -1
i cant wait
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Neliana
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Post by Neliana on Jul 26, 2004 7:57:33 GMT -1
Wow, you're talented! ;D I've written some poetry myself, but it isn't nearly as good as yours  |
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Post by 0georgie0 on Jul 27, 2004 3:26:07 GMT -1
none of my ones r either
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bambidevaco
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Post by bambidevaco on Jul 28, 2004 9:20:08 GMT -1
my poems r pretty pants! i am better at limericks
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Post by Duchessa on Jul 28, 2004 17:50:39 GMT -1
ugh, i definitely can't write limericks!!
I write stories, that's mi forte, what about you?
xoxoxoxoxxoxo
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Neliana
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Post by Neliana on Jul 29, 2004 10:04:04 GMT -1
Limericks are not my cup of tea either  |
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Post by 0georgie0 on Jul 31, 2004 6:12:23 GMT -1
definatly not me  |
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Post by LadyJasmine on Aug 2, 2004 6:55:02 GMT -1
I tried writing a song once........it was awful, (laughing) it sounded likea mix of nsync and backstreet boys. Waaaaaaaay to sappy.
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Post by kchic on Aug 26, 2004 19:55:17 GMT -1
ewwww... but i love your poems their so creative! |
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Post by kchic on Aug 26, 2004 19:56:06 GMT -1
Hey i just noticed i'm an apprentice now!! Yippee!!
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sofia
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Post by sofia on Jun 10, 2005 15:20:43 GMT -1
Those poems are better than any thing i'm ever going to write, your really talented.  |
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