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Post by Duchessa on Apr 27, 2005 18:06:04 GMT -1
*GASP*!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sleazy a*****e!!! l's not gna say yes, right? xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
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Post by Alex on Apr 27, 2005 19:48:58 GMT -1
AAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!! *lots of high squeky screams* ......aaaaaaaahhhhhhhh...*sniffs* dude..he HAS to say no! eeeek.....keep writing!!! u cant end with something like that..eeeeekkk....
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Neliana
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Post by Neliana on Apr 28, 2005 5:57:08 GMT -1
I feel so evil now ;D Writing cliffhangers is fun, especially when you're the only one who knows what's going to happen
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Post by madmelon on Apr 28, 2005 12:02:18 GMT -1
noooooooooo! write on! no cliffhangers! no fair!
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Post by Rachel on Apr 28, 2005 14:34:03 GMT -1
OMG!!!!
WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!!
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Post by Alex on Apr 28, 2005 20:27:10 GMT -1
...cliffhangers should be illegal !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by TruBellezzan on Apr 29, 2005 7:03:26 GMT -1
No they shouldn't because if they were, then you wouldn't be begging for more because you would have known what would have happened. And plus you would have to keep writing till the end because otherwise you'd have a cliffhanger where you stopped... i think... ... ... ...
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Post by Rachel on Apr 29, 2005 15:03:40 GMT -1
see this is 1 of the reasons why i prefer a book to fanfic coz in fanfic you have to wait for the person to write more and in a book you can just read to the end of the story all at once and you wont get any cliffhangers! ;D
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Post by Duchessa on Apr 29, 2005 18:16:04 GMT -1
*ack* yes!! We need more! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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Post by Alex on Apr 29, 2005 18:57:20 GMT -1
....thas y i didnt wanna post a fanfic..cus then ppl might be depending on me to write more...COF kinda made me lazy.now that i kno wut happens ;D ..but dont get lazy 2 Neliana!!! Write!!!
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Post by Neliana on May 2, 2005 9:03:25 GMT -1
I'm trying... but I've had such a busy weekend! I was gone all Thursday and Friday, and it was Queensday here on the 30th of April (some weird day to celebrate we still have a queen or something) It was lovely, but it did mean that I've lost another writing-day... and yesterday the weather was so pretty I just couldn't sit inside. And now I have to study.
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 2, 2005 11:27:58 GMT -1
ack, studying, that's what I'm meant to be doing, revision for my English SATS... i just wish that the government would just scrap them, they're pointless anyway... and I have to do them a year early in year 8! *glowers*
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Post by Alex on May 2, 2005 19:09:24 GMT -1
hahaha...i had my evil test for the year already...some english thingy too ..i passed tho..thats good enuff for me...those poor gr. 9s just had an evil math test..hahaha
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 3, 2005 9:07:35 GMT -1
I join in your evil laughter... ha ha ha, though I'm not sure why...
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Post by Alex on May 3, 2005 19:13:35 GMT -1
hey Neliana? done with ur studying yet?? *looks hopeful for more story*
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Post by Neliana on May 4, 2005 14:19:16 GMT -1
Nope... and I'll be gone tomorrow too... I will try to write something Friday!
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Post by Rachel on May 4, 2005 15:38:34 GMT -1
ok then i'll come back on friday ;D i am expecting it!!! lol
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Post by Alex on May 4, 2005 19:53:44 GMT -1
yep..consider that ur promise of more story! we'll keep you to it ;D
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Post by Neliana on May 5, 2005 7:27:54 GMT -1
Well, I got to bed early last evening, and suddenly I had some inspiration, so...
"What?" Luciano couldn't believe his ears. "What did you just say?" "I made you an offer," Enrico replied calmly. "I'll help you if you let me spend one night with the Duchessa of Bellezza." "But – that's ridiculous! I – I can't do that!" The Eel raised an eyebrow. "You can't? Well... make another offer, then, and I will think about it." "Tell me what you want and you'll get it," Luciano said almost immediately, glad that Enrico wasn't talking about spending the night with Arianna anymore. "I think I've got a lot to offer to you." "But you can't give me the one thing that I really want," whispered Enrico, unexpectedly sharp. "I want my Giuliana back, but that's never going to happen. Nobody can bring her back from death, not even the oh so powerful Duke of Bellezza. She's gone and I'll never see her again, no matter how much I want to." 'And that's all because of that mother-in-law of yours,' he thought, but he knew better than to say it aloud. Luciano wasn't supposed to know he wanted revenge. Enrico knew he had to be careful. "I – I'm sorry," stammered the Duke of Bellezza, who clearly didn't know what else to say. "I – I –" "It's okay." Enrico sighed and smiled faintly. "It's not your fault and there's nothing you can do about it. So stop feeling sorry for me and make me an offer. I'm wasting my time here." "I can give you money," Luciano said quickly. "Or maybe I can find you a nice woman. I know she can't replace your fiancée, but she'll be good to you. Each man has some needs, right? And she'll give you whatever you want. A happy marriage, some children –" "But she can't give me love." Enrico sighed again and raised his hand. "I've heard enough. I'll think about it and if I accept your offer, I'll let you know as soon as possible. Goodnight, little Duke." And with these words, he left the taproom.
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"Arianna?" It took a while before the soft whisper reached her drowsy mind, and it took even longer before she recognised the familiar voice. "Luciano!" She opened her eyes and saw him standing next to her, looking very concerned. "What's wrong?" she asked. "Nothing." He smiled faintly and took an unsuccessful attempt to hide his concern. "I just wanted to kiss you goodnight, that's all." "No, it's not." Arianna's reply was soft and uncertain, and she couldn't keep her voice from sounding sad. "You're lying to me. Why?" "I'm not lying to you!" he protested immediately. "There are just some things that I can't tell you about, at least not yet. Why don't you trust me?" "Because you've been acting strange for at least a month now. Even Silvia and Rodolfo have noticed you're paying less attention to me. You're avoiding me, Luciano." Arianna sighed and turned around, so she didn't have to face him any longer. "It's been enough. I can't take this any longer." "Arianna –" Luciano began, but he didn't finish his sentence. The Duchessa sighed again. "Please be honest with me, Luciano, that's the least I deserve. I just want to know... are you cheating on me?"
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Post by Rachel on May 5, 2005 15:10:13 GMT -1
omg! wats luciano gonna say to that??!! how can she think that?
yay! u wrote b4 friday!! ;D
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