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Post by Alex on Apr 29, 2005 18:54:53 GMT -1
i kno..it's so cruel....maybe i should just a be a mindless drone
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Post by Rachel on Apr 29, 2005 19:51:59 GMT -1
why dont you just post the last bit of the pre bit if you've already done it coz you havent posted any more of the story for ages! ;D
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Post by Alex on Apr 30, 2005 2:07:57 GMT -1
i kno..it's kinda very luciano/arianna..i've been holding out cus chances r after this ppl might kill me for not having more soon if they like it
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 1, 2005 8:50:39 GMT -1
well u havent posted for ages and u still seem intact... so why don't u write more now anyway? While thats going down just post more? make it up on the spot it doesn't need to be planned out to the last detail...
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Post by Alex on May 1, 2005 16:43:27 GMT -1
heh heh..ok..i g2g now but i'll post the last bit when i come bak...*looks nervous*
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Post by Alex on May 2, 2005 2:26:00 GMT -1
ok..since i havent posted anything in sooo long...better recap ;D...here's where i left off: “Luciano…I-I couldn’t bear for you to leave forever…but I know that you miss your old world, don’t you? And I would never prevent you from going back if you could…and now that you can, y-you …you should,” Arianna then looked away from him and lay on her back staring at the sky above. “Come here, Arianna,” Luciano said gently, and she slowly rolled over and hugged him, the top of her head beneath his chin as he hugged her back. “I...I don’t know what to do yet, I don’t want to leave you, I could never do that but I’m going to figure it all out…I won’t leave you.”<br> .......and then....... The apple doesn’t fall far from the tree would be an appropriate saying at this moment, Rodolfo as his daughter did, had a feeling that Silvia was up to something and it didn’t take long for the learned stravagante to unravel the mystery. He and Silvia had known about the young stravagante and their daughter: the magician’s apprentice and the young Duchessa; the alien boy to this time and place and the Bellezan girl, only recently told the honest truth about herself. They were like two people two different galaxies yet it comes to pass that they should fall in love, even with the small odds. Rodolfo couldn’t help but smile, he knew that this was bound to happen and was ready for what would follow. rite..so on to the next part....*twitch twich...looks around* The long, peaceful silence was finally broken by Arianna, “…Luciano, I…I’ve always lo-” her sentence was cut off as Luciano turned to her and broke the embrace while doing what he had waited so long to do. And when Arianna finally realized what was going on, she kissed him back, hoping the moment would never end but of course it did and they went back as they were before, lying in each other’s arms. When the silence came upon them again Arianna could finish what she had always known ever since she saw that boy from England standing in his pyjamas in Belleza on the Forbidden Day, the very one lying next to her, holding her. “Luciano, I love you”<br> For a moment or so Luciano let this sink in and when it did he knew exactly what it was he’d needed to tell her all along. “I love you. I’ve always loved you Arianna. I’ve loved you ever since we met. I guess I just never realized that it went back that far until now. ”<br>No more was said after their confessions; they just lay on the grass and watched the sun begin to set. Soon they would have to leave the tiny island for the city and the peace there would be traded in for busy schedules for the Duchesssa and the return of daily lessons with Rodolfo for Luciano. They both knew this and now that their secrets were out in the open, what would become of the two of them? Luciano eventually snapped out of his perfectly content daze and sat up which made Arianna realize that they had been there for quite a while as well. “How long have we been here?” she wondered aloud. Luciano stood up, thinking the same thing, “We had better be going. Your mother is probably really worried right now, I know that my…” he stopped mid-sentence, knowing that he was about to mention what he had avoided any conversation about for quite some time. He knew he had been a bit tactless in almost saying it because for one, he knew this would only make Arianna feel worse about wanting him to stay and because it brought back memories. No matter how long it had been since his translation, deep down it still hurt that he had practically lost his parents forever…even after he found out that it could all be fixed. He had known he couldn’t leave anyhow. eekk..ok..thats all i've got ...*runs away*
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Post by Duchessa on May 2, 2005 7:27:51 GMT -1
omg so cute! Lovelovelove! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
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Neliana
Magician
Just the girl-next-door
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Post by Neliana on May 2, 2005 9:09:25 GMT -1
Whiiii, love's in the air! ;D Write more soon!
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 2, 2005 11:24:13 GMT -1
totally and uttely romantic... *sighs*
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Post by Alex on May 2, 2005 18:57:41 GMT -1
yay ;D ..im assuming this is a good thing..i ..dont have anymore tho ...big tech project for wed. maybe my brain will function normally again after that
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 3, 2005 5:36:21 GMT -1
rather you than me! i hate work...
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Post by Alex on May 3, 2005 19:12:11 GMT -1
yea..me too....i think my tech site sucks..oh well..only a little more to do...
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Post by Rachel on May 4, 2005 20:06:01 GMT -1
havent u finished your tech project now you sed it was for wed. and thats today so your brain should be fuctioning properly by now so now you can think of the story ;D lol
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Post by Alex on May 4, 2005 21:33:28 GMT -1
heh heh ...knew i shouldnt have mentioned that...hmm..gotta think of were this is goin now
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Post by Rachel on May 5, 2005 15:17:03 GMT -1
YAY! keep thinking!! ;D
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Post by Alex on May 5, 2005 20:22:51 GMT -1
*sighs* im tryin...but im so uninspired i barely got down two paragraphs yeterday..and small ones...
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Post by TruBellezzan on May 16, 2005 17:26:25 GMT -1
are you stuck for ideas or something? i think you wrote it too long ago..... I think you should forget about this one and start afresh, it's no use trying to get back to old ideas.... not that this is bad or anything, it just isn't going anywhere anymore.... get a new plotline, something really good, and go for it! ;D I sound like my teacher......
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Post by Alex on May 16, 2005 21:49:21 GMT -1
lol..yes miss! ..its not that i dont have ideas..i wanted this one to do somewhere..it was something i really wanted to see happen..but it's also that presentations and culminating project time in the air..it's not pretty *shudders* ..and im supposed to be workin on lotsa other stuff rite now...teachers r evil....
..ok..and im also stuck on this one part....grrr..but it's cus i havent had time to think.....maybe i'll start another one..just not now...
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Post by Athena on May 20, 2005 22:37:13 GMT -1
Plz write more, it's a really good story. *taps foot impatiently* Just go for it.
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Post by Alex on May 22, 2005 19:32:28 GMT -1
okok i'll try.....*runs away* ....ok sry rite..i will try
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