Merla
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Mar 20, 2005 1:12:15 GMT -1
Post by Merla on Mar 20, 2005 1:12:15 GMT -1
Grrr... my friends all lied to me. We where supposed to go the movies 2day, but Ciara and Mary "couldn't go and we would go next weekend." Well, next weekend I'm going to Utah to visit family, and Mary has an away msg that says "going to see the ring 2 for the second time be back around 10:30". Gawd... I'm kind of mad at them for blowing me off... well, for lack of anything better to do I'll write more.
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Juliette slept soundly for the next two days, without the ballerina in her hand. She found out in study hall, fourth period where they all got to do their homework on the computers, that Murano was famouse for its glasswork, and figured that someone had sold the ballerina in Moresco when a caravan (she wasn't sure what they where called in Talia) was roaming through. The acrylic paint was probably applied there to make it more pretty, and then was taken to England. On Monday, while Juliette was walking to the drama room, Georgia grabbed her and stepped aside. 'Hey, I gotta talk to you, pronto.' 'Can it wait? I have to go to these callbacks or I won't get a part, or a very small one.' 'Yah... I guess, could you come over to my place?' 'Uh, sure, tomorrow, around six good?' 'Yah, mum dosn't allow me to have sleepovers on school nights, so don't bring anything, I just gotta tell you something.' 'Ok, your place, around six. Got it.' Juliette dashed off to the drama room and Georgia headed the other way.
Callbacks went well. Juliette and Marie worked well together. Some girls where also trying out for the parts, but after hearing a few of the songs and some lines, the two girls where sure they had this competition bagged. But, just in case, Juliette also applied for some of the dancers and chorus people. Juliette continued to have restful nights. She hadn't been in Talia for three nights. Tuesday, Juliette was so nervouse she had Alli go look at the cast list. She was stanging in the hallway a couple yards from the door where the list was posted. Alii squeezed her way through, ran her slim finger down the list, and looked at it long enough to memorize two names. By the time she sqeezed back out of the mob, she had a sad expression on her face. Juliette looked at Marie, who looked back at her. Alli got closer and looked both of them sadly in the face. She lowered her head and shook it. 'It'll take alot of time...' 'Yes??' Marie and Juliette said in unison. 'Cause you got the parts!!!!!' Alli practically yelled it. They all hugged and jumped up and down hysterically. 'Ohmygod ohmygod ohmygod, I knew it!!!!' Marie shouted. 'Me too!!!' Juliette could hardly contain her excitement. She supposed this would mean less time in Talia. Perhaps not the whole day, a few hours of exploring, the rest of sleep. Juliette could make it work. Her dance schedual was not harmed a bit by the play, and Talia did nothing to it as well. A lot of congratulating took place as the two girls sqeezed through to make sure their names where in the right places. They where. 'My understudy,' Marie said. 'is... Sierra Padren. She's got a good voice. She'll be good for an understudy.' 'Mine is...' Juliette paused a moment. 'Alicia Frescota? She was like, the worst one there!' Juliette glanced around to make sure she was no where in sight. 'She has a HORRIBLE voice! How could she even get a bigger-then-chorus part? Even if it is just the understudy.' 'Oh well, who cares? We'll be sure to take plenty of antioxodents, and dring lots of green tea to make sure we're healthy. Marie paused a second and ran her finger down the list. Juliette followed it till it landed on Raul. 'Langston Greens?? He's like, the hottest guy in school, and he's the one, YOU like.' Juliette stared. Her eyes fluttered above her friends head and widenend in horror. She dug her heel in Marie's foot. 'Ouch, what was that for... Hey Lang,' she said turning to face the tall guy behind her. 'heard you got Raul, cool.' 'Yah, it'll be great. To bad you're only Meg though, Juliette. It would have been cool if you where Cristine.' Juliette blushed furiousely. 'Thanks Lang.' She swirled around and looked for the Phantom, pretending to be occupied by finding him as Lang turned and walked away. 'Thanks Marie,' she said. 'I think you just revealed to the total hottie I like, that I like him.' 'Sorry, didn't know.' Marie sounded truely sorry. Juliette punched her arm playfully. 'I don't care, I think he likes me back, cool.' Marie smiled and started rambling on how such a perfect couple they would make as they walked outside to hang out in the courtyard till the bell rang.
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Ok, that's all I can manage today... it's not much, so sorry! So tired though... Bummed too... Bye! ~ Merla
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Merla
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Mar 20, 2005 16:51:11 GMT -1
Post by Merla on Mar 20, 2005 16:51:11 GMT -1
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It was Juliette's first night in Talia for three days. She looked around the hotel they lodged in, but no one was in her room she threw off the covers. She grabbed the dress on the chair next to her. Ok, well, someone is here if they layed out a dress for me... Juliette thought. The dress was light pink. The bodice was gathered, and the back had a criss-crossed pattern. The skirt was full and light, and the material was silky. Juliette's hair was already in a braid, so she walked out into the living room area of the presidental suite. Nobody was there, so she walked towards the office door. Murmering came from inside, so gently, Juliette cracked the door and pressed her ear to it. 'But wouldn't you...' Arriana's sweet voice filled the air. 'Not until you wither explain the system, or hand over the two girls.' Another, deeper voice interrupted her. 'Arriana, go see if Juliette is awake.' Rodolfo's booming voice filled the room. Juliette stepped back into the living area and watched the door. Arriana came out. Her mask was on, so it must have been an important conversation. Her violet eyes where wet with tears, and a water mark ran down the left cheek of the the mask. Arriana saw her and nodded her head down the hallway toward Juliette's room. 'What was that about?' Juliette asked. 'It's Nicholi inside there. The woman with the cloak is there too. She has a black, full-face mask, and is refusing to take it off. She says she will not reveal her identity to us.' 'What do they want?' 'They want... you and Georgia.' 'What?' Juliette was astounded. 'They want you two to bring back Falco. He is Nicholi's son. They said they will place guards around Luciano and the hotel doors. If you bring back Falco, then they will give him back.' 'Haven't you explained that he is alot better in our world?' Juliette was by now shaking. 'They don't care. All they want is Falco. Whether he is crippled or not.' 'And what happens if we don't bring him, or if we bring him, but he gives the silent treatment till he gets to go back?' 'Whats the silent treatment?' 'You don't talk till you get what you want.' 'Oh, yes, it sounds like Falco. Anyway, come talk to them.' Arriana pointed at a matching pink mask on the chair Juliette's dress was on. She tied it around her head, and adjusted the butterfly-winged mask to fit over her eyes. Juliette was led by Arriana to the office room and once entered, she curtsied politely while the senator bowed. 'We are dearly sorry for the delay.' 'I'm a heavy sleeper and Arriana had to help with my dress.' She turned to show the complicated back, hoping to convince them. It worked. 'It is fine, m'lady.' Nicholi said. Juliette looked at the masked figure. Something about her made her remember something. But she shook it away from her mind. This is what Georgia had to tell her. A meating would be held today, and Juliette was wanted to attend. She wasn't sure why. Juliette sat down at the empty chair next to Rodolfo, and looked at Nicholi as he sat down opposite her. 'Let us get to the untold point. You and your little friend bring my son back from wherever you are from, give us the secret to the technology - sources have let me know that you are great with "computers" - and we will spare your lives, and Luciano's. Don't, and I have every power to kill you and him, as this is my city, him here, you there.' Arriana gasped, Juliette was stunned, Rodolfo clenched his fist, and a scream was heard from the masked figure. 'NO! That was NEVER part of the conversation we ran through our heads,' The woman screamed. 'You tricked me!' She began to sob. Nicholi looked at her and sighed. 'My dear, this is life. I will do anything to get my son back, even if it means killing your preciouse, half-bred daughter!' Juliette's eyes widened. 'Half-bred... daughter?' She got up and slowely walked to the woman. She peeled off the black mask from the woman's tear-flooded face. 'Mum?' The woman's face matched her own. A tear streaked down her face. 'You where the one who chased us, you knew, you're one of THEM!' She sobbed and ran out of the room. 'Here we go.' Nicholi rolled his eyes. This made Rodolfo mad. He reached back and punched Nicholi in the face, knocking him over his chair. Arriana followed Juliette out of the room, followed by Rodolfo. But when they got there, she was gone, the dress and mask on the floor by the bed.
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Mar 20, 2005 18:52:09 GMT -1
Post by Duchessa on Mar 20, 2005 18:52:09 GMT -1
ooooh drama!!! More! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
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Neliana
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Mar 20, 2005 18:56:41 GMT -1
Post by Neliana on Mar 20, 2005 18:56:41 GMT -1
I can't remember if I've already commented, but it's really good! Keep up the good work & write more!
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Mar 21, 2005 5:06:53 GMT -1
Post by tashreneebriar on Mar 21, 2005 5:06:53 GMT -1
omg, this is my first post i luv all the fanfic its cool coz i hav to wait 3 months for COF so its all thats keeping me going hey merla, im a dancer too. how long had you been dancing before goind on pointe? i love the name juliette and the story is so good, please write more!! from tash
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Merla
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Mar 25, 2005 16:34:00 GMT -1
Post by Merla on Mar 25, 2005 16:34:00 GMT -1
Thanks everybody! Tash- I've only been on pointe for a year, but I've been dancing since I was about 3 years-old. O- welcome to za boards, I remember being new... No fun... lol. Anyway, more! ->
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Juliette woke up in her room at about 1:30. She raced to her door and locked it immediatly, figuring that her mother would be waking up any time time soon. The whole thing explained why her mother never woke up when she had bad dreams when Juliette was little. She flipped on the light switch andraced to her computer. She pressed the buttons and waited, impatiently tapping the white wood desk. A knock echoed through her room, and her mother's voice came through the door. It was a stranger's voice, she didn't really know who this woman was. That was why she was on the computer. 'Honey? I know you're awake.' 'LEAVE ME ALONE!' Juliette screeched back. 'Jules, I'm sorry I never told you. I didn't know that you where acually a Stravagator till the night you had Georgia over. Then I figured out she was one too, a little after I left.' YOU WHERE EAVESDROPPING?!?' Juliette couldn't believe this. Her own mother had gone against everything she told her not to do. 'GO AWAY!!!' Juliette heard a sob outside her door. 'I'm... sorry...' Juliette's mother said. Juliette heard rustling, and finally turned her attention back to the computer. It had been given to her after her mother and father got married. It had previously been her mother's computer. She clicked the button that said "search files" and typed "Registration" A window popped up. Model #- 2569841 Provided By- Gateway Registered to- Beatrice diChimchi Beatrice diChimchi. She shut down her computer and turned off the lights. Beatrice diChimchi The name ran through her head multiple times until finally Juliette went to sleep. The crystal snug in her hand, ready to face Talia and all in it.
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Sorry, that's all I can do today... tired from skiing... hard work, lol. IWMS (I'll write more soon)
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StarRider113
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Mar 25, 2005 18:24:17 GMT -1
Post by StarRider113 on Mar 25, 2005 18:24:17 GMT -1
Write more!! What kind of skiing do you do?
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Merla
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Mar 29, 2005 1:57:47 GMT -1
Post by Merla on Mar 29, 2005 1:57:47 GMT -1
Downhill... I just started, but I'm pretty good. Only fallen twice, lol. Anyway, more...
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Juliette woke in her bedroon in Talia. She got up and threw on her dress and mask. She looked at the two shoked faces. 'We didn't think you'd be back,' said Arriana. 'Well, here I am. Find out all you can about Beatrice diChimchi, okay? Thanks a bunch.' Juliette hurried out of the room and caught Niccolo on his way out. She figured her distraught mother would not have come bavk, that's why she had. When he heard her dress and footsteps, he looked around his shoulder. 'What do you want, mutt?' 'Just to tell you a little something about your granddaughter, granddad. I'm a skilled dancer and have a scholarship to a prestigouse dance school. I've scored a top rold in a drama my school is holding, and I'm a skilled athlete.' 'Your point?' Juliette could not believe how rude her grandfather was. 'Oh yes, one more thing.' She slapped him across the face, full force. 'That was for calling me a mutt.' She slapped him again. 'That was for threatening Georgia and I.' She slapped him gain, harder. 'That was for being a jerk.' And she slapped him, one more time, as hard as she possibly could (which was pretty darn hard). By now his lip was bleeding and his left cheek had swollen three times it's origional size, plus was beginning to grow a purpleish color. 'That was for never understanding your son and making him suffer like this. He knows what you are doing. We told him. He is ashamed to call you father for threatening to kill two girls in order just to have him back. He's happy where he is. Can you not understand that? You are a jerk!' On the word jerk, she shoved him out of the door and locked it shut. She turned around, her fist clenched, to see Arriana staring at her. Juliette couldn't bear it anymore. her knees gave way and she sank to the floor in a light pink silk heap, and began to sob. 'On, Juliette, please don't cry, please?' Said Arriana, rushing to her side to comfort her. Juliette sniffled and wiped her nose. 'I just can't stand to look into his face and realize he's my grandfather. He's such a jerk.' 'I know, but you taught him. The best doctorin Talia could not stop that swelling from growing. You taught him.'
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I gotta go. Juliette's got a temper, huh? C ya'll!
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New Stravagante
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Mar 31, 2005 15:09:18 GMT -1
Post by on Mar 31, 2005 15:09:18 GMT -1
Do you mind If I move all Stravaganza related fanfic to the fanfiction section in Talia? Otherwise it gets very confusing.
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Merla
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Apr 1, 2005 17:07:12 GMT -1
Post by Merla on Apr 1, 2005 17:07:12 GMT -1
Uh, well, I guess so. I'm kinda used to this board though (it's the first place I come to). But yah... I guess... It's really long though...
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Merla
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Apr 1, 2005 17:10:20 GMT -1
Post by Merla on Apr 1, 2005 17:10:20 GMT -1
Uh, well, I acually kind of do. I'm so used to this board now, I kinda don't want it to go. I understand that it gets confusing... (well, acually, I don't), but I'd still rather you not move it...
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Apr 7, 2005 9:07:51 GMT -1
Post by Rachel on Apr 7, 2005 9:07:51 GMT -1
hi merla i have only just read your story and i think it is really good plz write more!!!! ;D p.s is the story moving to a different board
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Apr 7, 2005 12:56:04 GMT -1
Post by TruBellezzan on Apr 7, 2005 12:56:04 GMT -1
I thought this was the place for fanfic! Apart from COF fanfic. I'm confused.
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Merla
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Apr 10, 2005 1:08:43 GMT -1
Post by Merla on Apr 10, 2005 1:08:43 GMT -1
Hey, I'm not sure if it's moving. Thanks a ton everyone for the compliments! I gotta go, but just wanted to post. I'll write some more soon. Luv yah!
~Merla
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Apr 12, 2005 11:39:55 GMT -1
Post by TruBellezzan on Apr 12, 2005 11:39:55 GMT -1
Yeah plz write some more!
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Apr 12, 2005 15:11:13 GMT -1
Post by Rachel on Apr 12, 2005 15:11:13 GMT -1
yea ppppppppplllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzz write more soon!
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i cant w8!
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Apr 13, 2005 6:27:18 GMT -1
Post by Duchessa on Apr 13, 2005 6:27:18 GMT -1
Yeah do! I luv this fic! But which other fanfic sec. IS there? Apart from mi sectrion in giglia and this one??? huh... xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
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Merla
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Apr 15, 2005 23:19:31 GMT -1
Post by Merla on Apr 15, 2005 23:19:31 GMT -1
OOH, We have achieved six pages of... posting... yay!!! Lol, anyway, I will write more, but whether or not my... writer's spunk is still present today is the question... lol, anyway, more! - * - 'You know what to do,' said a voice in the darkness. A sniff and sob followed. 'Yes.' 'Good.' Luciano sat up silently. Since he stopped eating the scant food he was given, he began to feel less dizzy and more concentrated (aside from the hunger that bit at his stomach). He knew what they where talking about, he had to stop them, but there was no way he could get out. - * - Juliette woke in her black room. She switched on the light and started changing. She threw on a pain or jeans and a tee-shirt, and pulled over a sweater lined with fleece. She put her laptop into its case, and started putting cloths into her bag. She flipped on her cell phone and pressed 1 on speed dial. Her best friend, Marie, always had her cell phone on, and always answered it, no matter where or when. 'Hey, last time u called me at 2 a.m. was never.' 'Haha. This is an emergency M! Can I come over?' 'Yah, climb the trelace by my room, I'll be at the window. You live up to the name Juliette, huh?' 'Shut up. Juliette was at the window, Romeo climbed up, duh!' 'Oh... whatever. Text me, k?' 'Ok, see yah lata babe!' Juliette snapped her phone shut and walked to the window. She opened it, hit the switch by it, and slid out. She had done this so many times before, but today she had no intention of returning. She gripped the pipe on the wall and began to slide down. She reached up and closed the window, then slid down the rest. She landed with a thud on the ground below, and quickly headed towards the gate. She started clicking buttons on her cell. DancerChick12: Hay Actrezz244: Wats wrong? DancerChick12: long story, can't explain. mom's... not who I think she is anymore... Actrezz244: Tell me DancerChick12: Can't, I'm so sorry, SBFF? Actrezz244: Always and forever! DancerChick12: K, I roundin the corner of ur street, BTIAFMarie and she had tons of abbreviation. SBFF was what they asked every time they couldn't do something or whatever, it meant Still Best Friends Forever. BTIAF was something Juliette had created. Whenever she was goin somewhere with her it meant Be There in a few. Juliette hurried down the street and when she got to the mid-sized house she rounded to the back. She started climbing the trelace that was on the wall and knocked on the window. Marie hurridly opened it and helped her in. 'Are you ok?' 'Yah, fine.' Marie slid into bed and Juliette got in next to her. 'Next time, try to make these rendezvous's a little later, ok?' 'Ok.' Juliette giggled, then went to sleep.
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Apr 17, 2005 16:34:05 GMT -1
Post by Rachel on Apr 17, 2005 16:34:05 GMT -1
wow!
its really good!
plz write more soon!
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Apr 21, 2005 11:54:14 GMT -1
Post by TruBellezzan on Apr 21, 2005 11:54:14 GMT -1
awww too short... i am dying for more here!
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